The Insomniac

I do not dream in my sleep.
All I see is darkness.
Time passes quickly in sleep.
Still all I see is darkness.

That could be the reason why,
I dream a lot when I’m awake.
I dream of the many reasons why  I love you.
I see differently when I’m awake.

In my sleep I do not dream.
Of you or anything else.
When I am awake I dream.
Of nothing else.

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7 Comments

  1. This poem, I love. 🙂

    I like the use of punctuation marks… Very helpful.

    Reading it leaves me feeling like I myself haven’t slept in days as well.

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  2. jian5

     /  April 13, 2009

    Awww, thank you! See you in UP!

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  3. Gayest,

    Insomniac is my title, walang agawan. Haha Inspired ka na naman ha. Tell me about it. 🙂

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  4. jian5

     /  April 14, 2009

    Haha, actually, insomniac is a word in the English dictionary. So it’s yours and mine. Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!

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  5. It’s still my title!!! :))))

    Gay. Ikwento mo na sa akin itong kadramahan mo. Haha

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  6. jian5

     /  April 15, 2009

    Bwahahaha! In denial!

    I just felt like writing it. Haha.

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  7. Sinong in denial? Haha Chaka kelan ka pa naging insomniac? 😛

    O? Totoo? What inspired this? 🙂

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